Finally done

I just rewrote my final story for the news peg. I think I did a really good job getting different views on it. I liked the topic I chose because I love to golf and it really showed in this piece of work. I went to the writing center to get extra help with my sentence structure and writing format. They really helped me out down there I would recommend you to go to them if you are having trouble with a a paper. Over all the news peg feature was an interesting piece but also hard to write. It was hard because when you wanted to talk about something else in the topic you really couldn't. You had to stay on topic the whole paper and try not to say something that was not really part of the main story. I believe that mine stayed on topic well and was to the point.